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This is one of my FFs and its originally in Danish. I have edited it a little bit, since we say something in danish that you can't really understand in english (:
-So here it goes
Lost inside
I stared at her. I was schocked. So schocked that i fell down on my knees.
I took my hands up in front of my face and cried.
How could this happen? Why her? Why?!
I couldn’t stop thinking about her.
I saw it happen.
We had always said to each other how much we loved each other.
How much we cared of each other.
But today it happened. I thought we were gonna be together
till’ we disappeared. Untill we died. But that wasn’t how the destiny was.
It wanted it to be this way. It was pouring down with rain,
but I didn’t care. I didn’t wanna leave her.
But I couldn’t just stay out here forever and just look at her.
It deeply hurt inside my heart. Now I was abandoned.
I’d regret that i only went with her, and nobody else.
Now I had nowhere to go. I had to be lonely in school.
”We have each other Julie, forever”.
She always said that to me with her sugarsweet smile.
I could remember how she looked at me with her shiny brown eyes.
That was the last time I was ever going to see her like that.
It was too late now. I should have kept her from it.
Maked her stop when there was time. It was seconds that counted.
I ripped off my neclace and looked on it with tears in my eyes. It was our friendship-neclace. Our name was specially written in it for our fault.
But how could she do it?! I thought of her.
I couldn’t think clear. She was still laying in the side of the road,
there where she for the last time was alive.
Why should her life end like this?!
Her life ended so fast and suddenly.
That was the way she wanted it to be.
She wanted to die fast. I almost couldn’t breathe.
I cried of pure despair. I sat down next to her and touched her cheek.
She was still warm. The Run-away-car was far away.
They haven’t even stopped or looked back.
You could clearly see that i was crying.
Her heart didn’t beat anymore. She died suddently.
I could still remember how she ran down the street with her eyes full of tears. I ran after her. She wouldn’t answer to what was wrong.
And i could still remember how she ran out on the road and just stopped running. It was a very busy road,
but it was ment to be. My hair flew in all different directions
but I didn’t care. I had figured out what she wanted on that road.
I saw how she brutally was driven over.
How she uttered her last sigh from the pain she was experiencing.
My tears fell down on her cheek. I grabbed her hand og held on tight.
I sniffled. I looked up and was decided.
I walked away from her and ran up the stairs to a high building,
as fast as I could. My turquoise skirt flapped in the cold wind.
Now I was up high. On top of all the apartments.
On the roof. I wasn’t used to be here, but today i wanted to.
I had to go through this as fast as possible. Without her, I couldn’t live.
I wiped away all my tears from my face.
I decidedly walked towards the end of the edge.
I put my feet up and stood firm.
Now i was balancing between life and death.
I could either choose to go on without Rikke,
or die and be reunited with her. I was going to choose the last.
I looked down. It was a long fall. It was so dark now,
that you almost couldn’t see anything.
I heard the door slam behind me. I wouldn’t look back.
A tear fell down in the dark. I was focused to do this.
Somebody grabbed me. It was Luminor. He was nearly shaking me.
”Julie, what are you doing?!” He had been following me.
Observed me. Also that with Rikke.
He used to look at me at classes in school. I closed my eyes.
He shouldn’t stop me from doing this. Never!
I’d never liked him. I turned around.
I kicked him so hard that he flew over the rooffloor.
I wanted to win some time.
I turned around to the dark edge again and focused on my goal.
I cleared my head for thoughts to only think about Rikke.
I felt something holding my hand. I opened my eyes.
She was like an angel. She smiled at me with her sugarsweet smile again. She stood next to me on the edge. She came to jump with me.
I couldn’t hold back my tears. She cried too.
We had to do this together like we did everything.
We heard nothing around us. Luminors weak scream to make me stop.
He was too weak on that area. His brother also killed himself.
That's why he couldn’t handle to go through this again.
I was the one he loved. But i didn’t feel the same way about him.
He cried. I’d never seen him cry. Never.
He wanted to look like a strong person, but it wasn’t the case now.
I jumped. The wind flew through my hair.
I was still holding hand-in-hand with Rikke.
The last seconds were counting af my life.
It was now i should be reunited with Rikke.
I didn’t feel anything when i hit the ground.
I smiled, because now it was time.
Time to be reunited with Rikke.
-So any comments ?
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-Mellie
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